That's my remix
Need some help wanna get better so give me some advice
I don't know whats wrong with it. Ask the public you play for. And if you don't play now, start with it for free. The publuc will tell and be fair. Learning is doing. Are self-critical. Listen hundreds of times to the thinks you make. I do too, after making my field recordings. Throw away 95%.
You're doing well. Greetings Grandpa 52 years.