EQ'ing on the speech sample is a bit off and otherwise there's a lot to be done mixing wise to that track, but like you said in the description. This has nice flow to it. I haven't been able to log into freesound for a few days, but I fixed all the mentionings of your username and even linked to your profile on the blog post that talks about making that tune.
( It's JohnLaVine333 though, not Jogn Lavine333. I would appreciate it if you fixed that√ )
Just having a second listen now, on headphones... there's some neat lead sounds in here, the kind of more Theremin type voicings. It's also cool the way you introduced some 8Bit feel to a Trance tune :]
Is there a way to tag people/get notifications on freesound!? Because I completely forgot I commented on this but just now saw your comment and just now stumbled upon your music. That shit is fuckin tight man. Like drum and bass on heroin meets john zorn at a jazz club. I would love to sing/banjo/make a tune w/ words out of some of your songs if you are lookin to collab!